2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(28):珍爱生命 拒闯红灯

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When pedestrian walk on a street.Some of them often jay-walk. Although there are some rules about jay-walk, but on one mind them. As we can see, much people go down the street and jay-walk. We need some reprimand about it. Let you think about it, If more and more people do that, the society will become what? If we do that, the traffic accident will geting more and more, so if we see some things about that, we could reprimand them and find them for a lot of money. What do think about it? do yourself one day.