小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a friend,his name is lily.He has a blue eye and a yellow hair.we all like to play with him. He is the best all of ours class.He always learn hard to the night ,so he had a bad si n .I want to make friend with he.When we play games during the midclass,did he study .