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行为稍欠流畅，过渡词用的还可以；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇，但词汇表达多样性不高，拼写检查还需加强。
Now day,many students ueses cell phones in class.On the one hand,they think it is a stly.On the other hand,they beleive it is convenience to relate their family and firends. However,at the same time,it is endangerment than students bring their phones to school.For example,when we taking class,some students' phones are ringing.It not only breaks out class' regulation,but also affects teacher lecture.What's more,a lot of students play phone in class,which it is a waste of time. Class is a place where we are studying than it need to quiet.In addtion,we are students and our task is study.students should concentrate on learning more koweledges rather than play phone in class.when we are young,we should try our best to learn more things.
