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作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文中使用了简单的连接词和过渡词；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间。
Now day,many students use cell phones in class.On the one hand,they think it is a sty.On the other hand,they believe it is convenient to relate their family and friends. However,at the same time,it is endangerment than students get their phones to school.For example,when we taking lessons,some students' phones are ringing.It not only breaks out class' regulation,but also affects teacher take class.What's more,a lot of students play phone in class,which it is a waste of time. The class is a place where we are studying than it need to quiet.In addition,we are students and our task is study.students should concentrate on taking in more konwledge rather than play phone in class.when we are young,we should try our best to learn more things.
