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Now ,some students play with thire cell phones in class.On the one hand,they think it is a sty.On the other hand,they believe it is convenient to relate their family and friends. However,at the same time,it is endangerment than students get their phones to school.For example,when we taking lessons,some students' phones are ringing.It not only breaks out class' regulation,but also teachers' class are broken.What's more,a lot of students play phone in class,which it is a waste of time. The class is a place where we are studying than it needs to quiet.In addition,we are students and our task is study.Students should concentrate on taking in more knowledge rather than fiddle with their phone.When we are young,we should try our best to learn more things.
