初中英语命题作文真题演练(22):My problem

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I am a Grade 9 student.My name is Zhangli.I have a problem but I have no courage to tell my teachers ahd my parents.I love painting.But my love of painting has become the main cause of my problem. I know I should work hard,but I have to do too much homework.I often stay up late to finish all my homework so that I have no enough time for my hobbies. My many peers also have the same problem.We often doubt whether it is worth working hard. What time should we be relaxed and what time should we learn?