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字数：300 满分：100分
过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；熟练的使用了从句和复杂句；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。
For those ways students used ,i am not quite support. as far as i am concerned, those ways just the smart boss 's means to expand the quantity of goods ,if they can sells more ,more money they can earn.For instance, you wnat to use those coupons you must duy things in his stores,actually your cheated when you are feeling some money saved !what's more, if you like a clothe very much and the store are sell,you can't control youself and buy many clothes ,but when you arrived home you found you don't need those clothes whatsoever,although you just want to svae more money and buy something you like at the meantime,you are wrong! At last, i want to say whenever you want to do something you must make a point of the result ,namely ,you should not do somethings just consider your emotions!
