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As we all know, it's very important to keep a good mood as it can help us in psychology and physical.As follows I will give some evident examples to support my ideas. Firstly, when you maintain a good mood everyday you can have a good heart,you know how to relief those pressures,but if you always feei very bad,I think you will have no idea to resolve those pressures and become more fury,you can imagin the final result,admittedly,that's too bad! secondly, it's apprent that you have a good mood which can benifit your health,of course,you want to do more things you like if you have the passion,for example, it's a sunny day, you have enough time to enjoy the awesome day,it's certain that you will have a good mood,adn you maybe have the vigor to do some sports. so, I think a good mood have an essential function to help you have a good health.
