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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:03浏览次数:5942
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Some people claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people.

Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

有人说住在乡下会比城市好。你怎么看?给出具体原因。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分68.5分
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文中学术词汇使用比较准确,但文中拼写错误稍多;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;采用了一些简单的从句;请注意分段。

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With the rapid development of urbanization, spacious rural area turned into urban lands while the polution in cities is growing worse. Therefore, numerous people prefer settling their home in rural areas to cities. So, is living in a rural area better than living around a lot of people. Some applaud this notion because rural areas are less poluted, which is beneficial to health. Nonetheless, I think living in cities is better than rural areas for cities can provide mature infrastructure and more opportunities. In the first place,

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