2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；可适当增加几条从句；文中词汇表达灵活多样，也能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇。

When mentioning Computer and Man,people sometimes find it difficult to reach a consensus due to their experiences and different values. Those who advocate computer is absolutely a wonderful partner believe that it is less likely to work effectively if there is no computer,since our daily life now is based on it.For one thing--graduation thesis,ti must be very difficult for students to make up their graduation thsis timely. Neverthless,those who insist on computer really like a murder say that the internet has made adolescents degenerated.For example,most of the young children are leave school since to internet games and even cause some adolescent criminal --which is develop from the role in killing-games. All in all,i think we should look at both sides of the coin.That is because the significance of computer is such a good guy can be overvalued as well as that of computer is a murder.Based on the above statements,i do think we should realize that only we treat the computer properly ,can it be a turly good tools for both working and entainment.