初中英语命题作文真题演练(41):My holiday

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I went to Da Lian last summer vacation. I am planing some activities this summer. If you ask me what is my favorite summer vavation, traveling the world is my only one wish. I love to travel because I can meet different people and visit sightseeing in all part of the world. I wish we have two summer vacations a year.