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2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:28浏览次数:5479
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题目 How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?
要求
1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切
2.为了让孩子独立, 父母应该……
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作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累学术词汇;文章层次较为清晰;可适当增加从句使用,注意极个别句子错误;请注意分段。

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nowadays,more and more families just have one child in family,naturally,the parents treat their children as the candies in hands and afraid of melting.so they spoil their children very much,they do evething for them such as washing clothes,sending them to school and so on.it seems that the children are very delicate. as far as i am concern,i think that parents should not treat their children as babies.at last,they will grow up.and parents will become old.then,how parents take care of their children.the true love to children is never this kind of love of spoiling.the true love for children is make them be independent and let them have the abilities coming to society.

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