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nowadays,more and more families just have one child in family,naturally,the parents treat their children as the candies in hands and afraid of melting.so they spoil their children very much,they do evething for them such as washing clothes,sending them to school and so on.it seems that the children are very delicate. as far as i am concern,i think that parents should not treat their children as babies.at last,they will grow up.and parents will become old.then,how parents take care of their children.the true love to children is never this kind of love of spoiling.the true love for children is make them be independent and let them have the abilities coming to society.