初中英语命题作文真题演练(41):My holiday

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I went to Da Lian last summer vacation. This year, I plan to spend my summer holiday on sports. If you ask me what my favorite summer holiday will be like, traveling around the world is the only answer. I love to travel because I can meet different people and visit sightseeing in all part of the world. I wish I could have two summer vacations in a year.