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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；多多加强句法知识；作者能词汇表达较准确熟练，但请仔细检查词汇的拼写。
from the satistical graph,we can draw a conclusion,the high education degree you are the more median weekly earnings you got ,apart from the highest doctoral degree,so what a question does the chart explain? as we all know ,with the social's development,science play the most important role,the transportion cloth food live and use everything relevant with us they all have a connect with the science ,in other words ,it means .we can't live without it. that can explain the phonominent why current social need high education degree telants, all right ,let talk the doctoral degree,it's median weekly earnings is lower than the profession degree ,why,it because in the world there is not exist too much topest science coorparation,even if you have a high degree or you are a person with ability,you may fail to employ a position,it is happen offten,cause the uauslly coorporation think you are too excellence to use you nowadays whatever you do ,there aways need a degree,that why the peopel own high education more and more
