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作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，学术词汇使用稍显不足；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段。
My name is Li Hua.I am a senior high school coming from Guangzhou city.AS a number of 90-posts,I have to admit that I am not independent.I really depend on my parent or friends.They often told me that I should try to do somgthing by myself.So I want to apply for the job.Althogh the job is without any reward,but I believe that I will gain a valuable experience.In my opinion,only when I go through this experience,can I realize the importance of the independent.
