2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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At present,it is common to see digital products almost enerywhere,ranging from mobile phones in the hands of young college students to various facilities in morden office buildings and family houses.That is to say,digital products have become extremly popular in our daily life. Obviously,these wonderful inventions have exerted profound influnence on us in more than one way.On the one hand ,digital products surely perform siginificantfunctions in people's lives.For exemple,no office work could continue withoutcomputers and many other devices.Besides ,more and more people are learning new knowledge with the help of multimedia .One the other hand,some people may be dependent on such facitilies ;some of them may get addited to them.Take some young people for exemple,they have been wasting too much time playing computer games owe to lack of self-discipline and proper supervision. In a word ,digital products,like enerything else ,have both favorable and unfavorable aspects.Whatever effects they have,one thing is certain :digital products themselves are neither good or bad ,We are supposed to make the most use of them and try to avoid the possible side-effects.