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小学二年级英语作文:Our house

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:49浏览次数:5576
要求:
用英语描述下自己的家,字数在100字以内.
用户的作文(系统评分82.5分
评语:

单词拼写很棒,可考虑增加学术词汇的使用量;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;全文结构较为严谨。

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The burden of students has been a hot topic for years, but the load of parents has received little attention, especially from their own children. The picture shows us a touching moment when a little girl comes to greet mom. Realizing her mom must be very tired after a day's work, the girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder. In response, the mom kneels down to show how happy and thankful she feels. All this reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could to let me have the best. But, totally engaged in my own study, I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels, and always think studying well is the only thing I could do in return. Now I know I can do my best to help with the everyday washing, bedroom cleaning, or at least prepare breakfast myself, so as to share mother's daily burden. The picture convinces me it is more important to be a good daughter than a "good" student.

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