小学二年级英语作文:Our house

建议加强积累过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨；建议平时练习中，多多背诵一些好的句子和文章；文中拼写错误比较多，用词也稍显贫乏；连词使用偏少。

No one can hurt you including youself,and donnot look down upon youeself ,you are the best one .Hold your dream and do hard ,you will make it . Maybe you will whristel and feel horrible ,remmerber one thing do you own . Only you breavy and great ,you can look the beautiful one