小学二年级英语作文:Our house

文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写还要加强；行文流畅，但衔接词比较少；若加重从句在文中的比例，文章会很棒；连词使用偏少。

No one can hurt you including yourself,and don not look down upon yourself ,you are the best one .Hold your dream and do hardly ,you will make it . Maybe you will whistle and feel horrible ,kown one thing do you own . Only you brave and great ,you can look the beautiful one