小学二年级英语作文:Our house

单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；行文流畅，但衔接词比较少；若加重从句在文中的比例，文章会很棒；连词使用偏少。

No one can hurt you including yourself,and don't look down upon yourself ,you are the best one .Hold your dream and do hardly ,you will make it . Maybe you will whistle and feel horrible know one thing do you own . Only you brave and great ,you can look the beautiful one