题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
用词灵活多样,也能较灵活地使用一些学术词汇;句法很棒,若适当增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。
At present,it is common to see digital products almost everywhere,ranging from mobile phones in the hands of young college students to various facilities in morden office buildings and family houses.That is to say,digital products have become extremely popular in our daily life. Obviously,these wonderful inventions have exerted profound influnence on us in more than one way.On the one hand ,digital products surely perform significant functions in people's lives.For example,no office work could continue without computers and many other devices.Besides ,more and more people are learning new knowledge with the help of multimedia .On the other hand,some people may be dependent on such facilities ;some of them may get addicted to them.Take some young people for exemple,they have been wasting too much time playing computer games owing to lack of self-discipline and proper supervision. In a word ,digital products,like everything else ,have both favorable and unfavorable aspects.Whatever effects they have,one thing is certain :digital products themselves are neither good nor bad ,We are supposed to make the most use of them and try to avoid the possible side-effects.