小学二年级英语作文:Our house

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No one can hurt you including yourself,and don't look down upon yourself ,you are the best one .Hold your dream and keep it up ,you will make it . You may whistle and feel horrible but one thing you know is that only you brave and great ,you can look the beautiful one