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2013考研英语二图表作文预测:出生率和婴儿死亡率

发布时间:2013-07-05 15:58浏览次数:3949
要求:

The table below gives information about the difference between life expectancy and infant morality. Write an essay of 160-200 words. Your essay should

1、describe the difference between life expectancy and infant morality

2、possible reasons

3、give your comment

You should write neatly on your ANSWER SHEET2.

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用户练习作文:

The two columns reflect the life span and infant mortality from 1960 to 1990.From the first column,we can see that the life expectancy of poeple changed from roughly 40 years old in the 1960 to 40 years old in 1990. Look at the second bar chart,the infant mortality decline about 100people from nearly 200 to 100,which approximate 20 years,during 1960 to 1990. The phenomena,soaring life expand and extreme falling infant movtality,may conclude in two reasons.For one thing,the gene technology ensure food adequately,reduced the rate of sick.For another,advanced techincial of Medicial can save giant infants and patients. All in all,the two table express the standard of our life changed dramaticially,thanks to technology improved,increasingly of people live a more heathier live,in passing 30 years from 1960.

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