2013考研英语二图表作文预测:出生率和婴儿死亡率

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The two columns reflect the life span and infant mortality from 1960 to 1990.From the first column,we can see that the life expectancy changed from roughly 40 years old in the 1960 to 40 years old in 1990. Look at the second bar chart,the infant mortality decline about 100 people from nearly 200 to 100,which approximate 20 years,during 1960 to 1990. The phenomena, the soaring of life expand and extreme falling of infant mortality,may conclude in two reasons.For one thing,the gene technology ensure food adequately,reduced the rate of sick.For another,the technical of Medicial advanced can save numerous infants and patients. All in all,the two table reveal the standard of our life changed dramatically,thanks to technology improved,increasingly of people live a more healthier live,in passing 30 years from 1960.