2009年6月英语四级作文真题:博物馆免费对外开放

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；学术词汇的使用希望还能更熟练一些，拼写检查还需加强。

Nowadays more and more museums are open to the public free of charge.In this way they can atract more people to go to their museum.And it also help people to know our culture clearly.It is easy to access our ancient culture by visitting many museums. Bt some people say that it will take many questions to do so.Such as if the pulic saw somthing that they very like it.They maybe want to touch it.So there have many dangerous to the goods of museums.And if there have many public go to museums in same times.Also have dangerous to museums. In my opinon,museums can make a schedule to limit the days that what time it can free of change to the public.Thus it will be easy to prevent the questions.