高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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my hometown is a beautiful place,but great changes have taken place in past years. there uesd to be a lot of green trees around my hometown .fish swam happily in the clean river,but at that time ,people's house are simple.in general,we had a happy life. now ,many buildings are appearing,many cars are running on the road.it is fulled of happeniess.however,every thing has two sides.the enviorment is polluted.trees are on decrese,the number of fish is becoming smaller and smaller. i think we should pay attention to these problem. i believe if we do now ,we can change the situation.