内容:本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品,非常感兴趣,请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作,希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1.price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2.establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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I knew your new product of No.5670 during the exhibition held in New York on the data of Dec.15th to 22nd and I was quite interested in it. Would you like to send us a price list and an instruction? Thanks for your attention and we are expecting to establish the business relationship with you. We are looking forward to your early reply!