字数:200满分:100分
过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;请注意积累词汇量,尤其学术词汇的积累;请注意分段。
Succeed with cooperation From the picture describe, two person who both lack of one leg are going forward with hand in hand and binding the crippled leg, thrown their walking sticks. Apparently, this two people, each of them has their own weakness so that they can not accomplish their goals efficiently and independently, are cooperating to make their dream succeed.