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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17572
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分80.0分
评语:

学术词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays, we are bombarded by various high-tech products such as computer, cell phone, ipad, cars, airplane, X-ray machine and so on. And we are enjoying the conveniences and comfort brought by these state-of-art products. But few of us have ever stopped to think about what make our life so easy and enjoyable? Actually, the answer is very simple-Science. From clothes to food, to shelter to transportation, science changes our life in every aspect. Shoes designed based on science protect people from harming; Genetically modified food is helpful to solve the problem of hungry; Strong housing substantially reduce the death rates resulted by earth and high speed rail provides us a more efficient, safer travelling. In fact, without science, everything will be in state of chaos. So, it’s little wonder that almost all the universities requires their students to take part in science class.

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