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2008年考研英语作文真题:你一条腿,我一条腿,你我一起,走南闯北

发布时间:2013-05-20 22:01浏览次数:19617
要求:
题目:你一条腿,我一条腿,你我一起,走南闯北(题目需自拟)
说明 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay
要求
1.describe the drawing briefly
2.explain its intended meaning
3.give your comments

字数:200满分:100分


用户的作文(系统评分88.5分
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过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;可适当增加从句的使用;作者词汇表达恰当,同时能较灵活地使用学术词汇;请注意分段。

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Succeed with cooperation From the picture describe, two person who both lack of one leg are going forward with hand in hand and binding the crippled leg, thrown their walking sticks. Apparently, this two people, each of them has their own weakness so that they can not accomplish their goals efficiently and independently, are cooperating to make their dream succeed. Taking a glance at every aspects of our social life or the line of business, we can easily perceive the significant impact of cooperation between person and person, company and company even country and country. Firstly, when we co-work by that way, it is helpful for us to recognize our own shortcomings. Secondly, it will improve the work's efficiency to draw each other's strength and supervise opposite part, making process fluent. And finally, it is a good approach reaching one trust another. There is no doubt that we would have a road filled lots of difficulties when pursuing our enterprise without cooperation!

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