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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13013
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

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200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分79.0分
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作者学术词汇使用上还有很大提升空间,但拼写错误稍多;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

It is a very eye-catching picture,in which a man is doing something.What makes this picture extraordinary is the caption,which clearly mirrors a scenario that permeates our society,that is ,the honesty is not in value in many people. The artist uses this unique metaphor in order to endow us with the viewpiont that no matter how the world is changing,honesty should be a good virtue all the time.As China has been experiencing a economic boom with numerous new things mushrooming,people start to throw away the deep-rooted throught that one should keep promise what he once said.Istead,they regard superficial fame and dazzling appearance as the signs of succuss instead of unknown diligence.However our richs consist not in the extent of possessions,but in the gains we get from helping others,as is a chord in life,not a solo.I firmly believe that honest should become a life-long pursuit,part and parcel of our life. Judging from the analysis above,we may safely come to the conclusion that daunting problem demands effective couter-measures.It's a high time to launch a compaign spurring every citizen to be honest.Every cloud has a sliver lining.Only through the combined efforts of government and society can we forcefully and comletely eliminate this "tumor"-unhonesty.Likewise,if this can be extended to the relations among nations,it will be bliss for the world peace.

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