作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;全文结构较为严谨。
Dear editor, Nowadays,with the rapid development of economy and the steady growth of people's living standard.More and more cars were bought by many ordinary families.They are used to be a transport taking the place of walking in order to save time.Driving cars are not only comfortable but also more safety than riding bicycles.However,It is undeniable that too many cars cause much pollution which does harm to our healthy and traffic jams. As far as I am concerned.Giving citizen a clean and quiet environment,the government ought to take effective measures to control the number of cars. Sincerely yours.