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拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
In our daily life,friendship is indispensable to us,no matter how successful we are.Having a precious friendship is conducive to our mental and body healthy.We were in low mood,the friends could comfort us and encourage us to be cheerful. However,from another perspective,if we breach of discipline with friends in school,such as playing jokes on other classmate,gathering to smoking and drinking,covering up the classmate's mistakes.Thus,I don't think that the friendship will have good effect on ourselves. Personally,understanding the meaning of friendship correctly is very important.I believe that really friendship will be beneficial to our healthy development of physic and mental.Really friendship will attach great importance to help each other in study and make common progress.
