托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第49篇:坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮

拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；采用了一些简单的从句；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

I agree that perseverance makes people stronger. A short time is difficult to see the result accumulated bit by bit. Perseverance of long time is indemnification of successful. For example, each entrance examination is testing our accumulation of knowledge and learning ability of some times ago. Each subject is not only a set of questions, but also it test ability of use knowledge solve problem. What kind of knowledge, how to solve problem, why do like this , only from continuous learning and continuous accumulation in order to know the answers of these questions. We continue to improve our ability by examination, knowledge is constantly to increasing. Let solution to the problem of knowledge diversity. Knowledge`s altitude decide people`s vision. Solution to the problem decide people`s fate. Continuous accumulation of knowledge and a lot of access to information in order to make us keep strong. Some times ago, television program "super king of lose weight", overweight people constantly lose weight by sport, most of overweight people to weight loss is no confident in the beginning of program. Mental health counseling to let them recognize the importance of loss weight. They loss weight by sport. They not only loss wight, but also restore confidence. Let them face life with optimism. They constantly grow in perseverance. Finally, perseverance let us stronger, good things accumulation bit by bit, we will get unexpected results.