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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17572
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分62.0分
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文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;全文结构较为严谨;请作者词汇表达更加灵活多变一些,也请仔细检查词汇的拼写。

用户练习作文:

in the life, some people see things and diectly conclude the conlusion. but other people often hesitate to make dicisions. with regard to this ideas, people differ from it, in my opinion, i think that sanp judgments can never be trusted. firstly, many things looked like as we expected but undergo a long time later, we finally see the true phenomen. then we were surprised and lost opportunity. for example, we know a person who looked like ugly, untidy, and opening, so we distrust and refuse his help during wokding time. we choose the nice others looked like to coperate, all things happend, we realized been cheated. then, we find that the ugly friend truly worthy of trusting. anyway, we should spent lots of time to realize people not only his appearence but his charriscic, as the old saying , pratice is the best methord to test true phenomen.therefor, we support this issue that snap judgments can never be trusted.

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