Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
复杂句的使用不是很丰富;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;请作者增加词汇丰富度,适当增加学术词汇的使用,拼写错误要努力避免;请注意分段;可以适当增加副词的使用;连词使用偏少。
As we cansee , the education pays in median weekly earning is much higher than unemployment rate. according to these datas, the doctoral degree has much difference between median weekly earning and unemployment rate. The doctor is such a high pays work, lead to the difference of incomes.then focus on the professional degree, it aslo has a big boom in the social.