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过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；句式变化多样；文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇，但词汇表达多样性不高，拼写检查还需加强。
Recently,traditionnal learning hve changed by distance learning from internet ,and more and more colleges afford the chance to their students not learning at classroom,I do not think it is good idea . At first ,learning from the internet have its advangtages.As the new fashion learning, it can atrract mroe people who want to study more but not want to go the lang distance,people just need stay at hoom and open the computer to choice the classes what the want to learn,there are so many eaducation resours for students.Secondly,techers can benifit from the new teaching. It is a new way to save time and only one teacher even can teach numbers of students on the internet at the same time.But in my point, it cannot insteat of the traditional learning or teaching . First of all,on the classroom students can ask teacher for help when they do not understand one question as soon as possible,and teacher can solve the problems immediately.And the most important things is exchange the ideas with other students,people on the real classroom can communicate with some other students or teachers when the have different views about one theme,but it is hard achieve for the people study on the internet. in conclusion,the new learning is the products of the moden technology which can bring us the new change of study ,but it is cannot instead by the traditional learning.
