2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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in recently years, as the the technology developing, the computer is enter the lives of most people. more and more people are depended the computer to deal with some work office or entertainment. but everything was both sides, if you used it appropriate, it is advantage of yourself,but, if not, it will be disadvantage of your life or health. though the computer is taking convenience of people's lives, most of people are excessively depended the computer, which lead to a lot of problems, such as health, crime. as the developing of computer, most of people decreased the communication region, such as shopping in the internet