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1999年1月英语四级作文真题:别害怕说“不”

发布时间:2013-05-14 18:33浏览次数:1890
要求:
  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic. Don’t Be Afraid to Say“No”. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
  1.别人请求帮助时,在什么情况下我们会说“不”
  2.为什么有些人在该说“不”的时候不说“不”
  3.该说“不”时,不说“不”的坏处
用户的作文(系统评分80.5分
评语:

文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较好的使用部分学术词汇;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

Of course, being kind-hearted is welcomed. We all like someone who is ready to give a hand, especially when we have something troublesome. But, which attitude should be held when we are turned to? Just help? In my view,that's irrational. Many of us have our own principle, which is hard to alter. They're our rules being a man. When others' asking for help has enormous conflict with our principles, we 'd better think twice before action. For instance, during exam, your classmates or good friends ask for your answers, you should refuse and explain later. After all, such help will just do harm to them, and break your principles. Temporary happiness coming from high scores and short-sight is really a shame. As for the question why most people seldom say "no", I can only say it's conventional, a typical of chinese. We don't want to be embarrased with our friends, etc. When you really want to refuse, just say it, otherwise, you can only get the aftermath of hurting others and yourselves.

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