文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较好的使用部分学术词汇;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Of course, being kind-hearted is welcomed. We all like someone who is ready to give a hand, especially when we have something troublesome. But, which attitude should be held when we are turned to? Just help? In my view,that's irrational. Many of us have our own principle, which is hard to alter. They're our rules being a man. When others' asking for help has enormous conflict with our principles, we 'd better think twice before action. For instance, during exam, your classmates or good friends ask for your answers, you should refuse and explain later. After all, such help will just do harm to them, and break your principles. Temporary happiness coming from high scores and short-sight is really a shame. As for the question why most people seldom say "no", I can only say it's conventional, a typical of chinese. We don't want to be embarrased with our friends, etc. When you really want to refuse, just say it, otherwise, you can only get the aftermath of hurting others and yourselves.