2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；虽然文中能够较丰富地使用学术词汇，文章用词太过单一；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。

Computer and Man More and more people are buy own computer,then it play a important role in their life.According to some estimates,people play computer every day at least more than three hours.And some people play computer game every day more then five hours. Computer is a tool to communicate and to search knowledge.Its coming out is intergenerational .It help us keep touch easier,and restore more information. However,it has its disadvantage.More and more people absorbed by computer,can't help theirself.