2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

学术词汇比较灵活，还要请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度；如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累。

Computer and Man More and more people buy the own computer,then the computer play an important role in their life.According to some estimates,people play computer every day at least more than three hours.And some people play computer game every day more then five hours. Computer is a tool to communicate and to search information.Its coming out is intergenerational.It helps us keep touch easier,and restore more information. However,it has its disadvantage.More and more people absorbed by computer,can't help themselves.