2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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nothing succeeds without a strong will how many succedful persons do you know? Do you how they get the success. Nowdays, it's easy to know manythings due to the internet technoligy. But we know it's not so easy for them, they also met difficulty, such as Ma yun CEO of Taobao, Li Yanhong CEo of Baidu, if the give up when they met difficulty, they won't success. So the strong will is the most improtant character for you, trust yourself, Just do it. One day, you'll complete the great mission. Of course, as student, we should learn hard. Otherwise, you'll fail test.