单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;语言不流畅;请注意分段;连词使用偏少;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
I have a good friends. His name is Wang San. He likes English very much. He live in Guang Dong province. Every week I and he go to play. I likes him very much. Our friendship is good. For example I help him to study English and he help me to study china .