托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第49篇:坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮

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Nowadays,many people want to be successful in their life. At first,they always made a plan to the dream.but several days later, we found that they absolutely had given up their's ideas.clambing the mountain is not very harder, but perseverance is not very easy whatever have difficulties,so, There are little people in the success road,because, perseverance is very harder for everyone. Living the big house and driving the farmous brand car is most young people's dream.For example,we see a person who doing business earns lots of money. with percious diamound and farmous suitacase.we admire the wealthy of making something,and swear to do it as harder as theirs.For example, my friend opened the restaurant in the city center.shortly long ago,when i asked her the business what to do. she said sadly, "I always get up at 6:00 in the morning and check all foods whether it is clean.I have to give up my snap and delayed my opposal."Because she is no longer make efforts to do businerr need to get up early. so the restaurant is closed and lost her dream finally. This same things frequently happend among people. when i graduated from the university and try to study abroad.I applyed for the famous university and waited the offer from it.But i need to resign from my opposition and study half of years in English.finally,my dreams did not come true.several years passed, I realized if i want to get better social status, then i have to stick it and climb the high stages.In effort to attampt study mothords, I find confidence,courage,belief once been lost.So, perseverance makes people stronger.