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Traffic congestion is becoming more and more serious in most countries, some of which suggest to limit the use of cars in inner city areas to solve this problem. Personally, maybe, its advantages overweigh the drawbacks. Admittedly, the limitation may lead some problems to the public. For example, when people, eapecially the female and the seniors, need to buy loads of things in supermarkets, which happens to be located in city center, they are likely to have problem in bringing things home. Although the public transportation will help but it still not as convenient as private cars. Besides it will also trouble when family tend to go camping but their car is limited thar day. However,it will bring more benifits prospectively.To begin with, the public transportation are under improvement, which means that it can provide more routes and services to enable families' going camping and such of things. Meanwhile, to do a favor to those needed, the supermarket can offer them door-to-door service. Fuether more, the limitation can enhance the process of public transpotation ,because after the limitation the transpotation will be streesful, faced with an increasing number of passengers. In order to unwride it, more investment will be put on it by government. And a better facilities may lead to development of tourism, which can benifit the finance condition too. Last but not least, the limitation can protect the environment from air pollution on some scale and make it possible to leave our offsprings a clearer environment, which means the most. To sum up, it is hard to definite its property,but considering that our earth is our only home now , the limitation is resonable and positive.
