文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;衔接词汇很少,建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
Students in high schools must have social practice. The purpose of doing it is to put the knowledge we learn in class into practice and get to know society. Social practice can bring us into touch with many people and help us learn what can’t be learned in class. We can gain some experience as well. Through social practice, we know it is very important for us to master science and technology and we are encouraged to study harder to meet the needs of the highly developed society. We young people are the future of the world. Social practice can help us to make good preparations for the future. So I think it is necessary for us to have social practice.