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From:wanghaiying@hotmail.com Date:Dec.23rd,2008 TO:sales-department@hotmail.com Dear Mr johnson, We have received 3000 products from your company on Dec.22nd, however,according to our signing of the No.35 order,the products should be 3500,and another we have not received so far.Because we need the product emergency ,please check your product list,we are looking forward to your early reply! sincerely, Wang Haiying
