文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开;连词使用偏少。
From: Wanghaiyang@hotmail.com Date : December 23 rd, 2008 To: sales-department@@hotmail.com Subject: Check the product list Dear Mr. Johnson, We have received the 3,000 products from your company on December 22nd, 2008, but according to our signing of the No. 35 order, the number of products should be 3,500, the other 500 products we have not received so far. Please check your product list. We are looking forward to your early reply! Yours faithfully, Wang Hai yang