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Do coupons and group-buy deals make us be smart consumers? Nowadays,lots of manufactures give out coupons and sponsor group-buy deal activities to promote their products.Many students think it is a good way for them to save money by using coupons and group-buy deal antivities.In my opinion,when we use coupons ,indeed,we can save a little money.But in the long term, it has no good for us to be smart consumers.The following are my reasons. To begin with,when we hold a lot of coupons ,we are likely to use them buy something we don't need.sometimes,some students do not need buy clothes,because they already have enough ones.However, they decide to buy that just bcause when they use coupons the price is lower and they can save a bit of money.Secondly, some coupons and group-buy deal have time limit,which means we couldn't buy something at anytime.Sometimes,it is inconvenient. In a word,coupons and group-deal can not make us be smart consumers.Although in the short time,we can save a little money .In fact,when we use coupons and group-deal ,it tepmts us to buy more things we don't need.So,we need be sensible when we treat coupons and group-buy deal.
