拼写做的很棒,学术词汇可适量增加;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
College years have prepared you for your future life A few months later, we are going to graduate from our university. Four years of university life just like a flash of light passing by has presented vividly before my eyes. As is known to us, college years have prepared us for our future life. I have learned a lot from my years at university. First, as a student, we certainly should attach great importance to our study. Unlike Middle schools, in which teachers always teach students hand by hand, university study depends more on the self-study than the teachers’ instructions. We attend many kinds of classes, major or minor; all impart us a lot of knowledge of different subjects. Second, life in university is not always about study. Activities are an important part of it. During all kinds of activities, we learn a lot of things which we can’t get from our books, such as how to discernibly communicate with others, how to harmonically work with others, how to completely show up ourselves, thereby developing our work abilities. Last but not the least, university life also provide us many opportunities to make all kinds of friends. Students from different areas, studying and working together, help each other better understand different cultures in different places, thus help to enlarge our friend circles. In my point of view, college years are colorful, fruitful, and instructive not only in study, but also in work ability and communication skills. In a word, university life have well prepared us for our future life.